Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Not really a haiku, haiku.

Motherless daughter

stumbles through adolescence

rises from ashes

2 comments:

Jared said...

I love it! How is that "not really a haiku"?

P.J. Murphy said...

Firstly, loved your work on here, particularly this piece. Really thought-provoking and well-written - I'm not a huge haiku fan, but had to take a moment to stop and admire the story you could tell with this short form. Your other work on here is excellent, covering such a wide diversity of stylings.

I have voted for you on Poetry Blog Rankings ( having just joined on Sunday! ), and added you as a favourite.

No obligation, but I would really appreciate if you would return the favour. My PBR page is at LiltandRhyme - ( either LiltandRhyme or pjmurphy is my username on the site, not quite sure yet! )

No problem if my work is not to your taste, but as a newbie I'd prefer any vote than none, to get me up and running!

Keep on writing, you have a wonderful talent.

PJ